Little Layton Problems
Some shameless advertising!

Well, LittleLaytonProblems is a year old now, and we’ve got over 700 followers!  On top of posting a new submission, I hope you guys don’t mind a little bit of advertising.  When I’m not working on this blog, I’m working on my stories, which I hope to someday get published.  But getting reviews is near impossible these days, so I’m hoping this will finally get some people reviewing, because I need some real feedback.

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https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3199684/1/Promise-of-the-Rose-Rewrite

Inspired by the PS2 game “Rule of Rose”, it’s a story about a teenage girl who finds herself drawn to an orphanage dominated by some pretty devious kids.  I really hope some people will read and review on the site there—you don’t need an account!

Sorry for the shameless advertising, and thanks for all your support, everyone!

Reworded submission!

Reworded submission!

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Another altered submission!

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Yet another submission!

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